A loosely arranged marriage, v2

A loosely arranged marriage... v2

A loosely arranged marriage, v2

Here we go again 🙂

Originally launched 2 years ago, the strip format was challenging but ultimately limiting. I was also writing in a descriptive, expository style. Which is cool, except it’s not terribly exciting for me. So I changed the writing style to be more personal.

This time completing the page took a couple of weeks. One of evening of rescripting & thumbnailing, then working on the art whenever I could.

The crazy part is that I like the page. I like the end result. It’s not perfect (ask any artist and they will point out every single flaw in their own art) but I like it. Which is a surprise considering how hypercritical I am.

Below is the post accompanying the original strip. And here’s the original strip, for comparison:

[lockercat]A loosely arranged marriage...[/lockercat]

The new page format is a big change for the better. More information & details can be included. And plenty more creative options for panelling & layout.

And I finally finally finally found an inking brush that I just love: the Gritty Brush Reverse by Ron D. Chan (go support him & buy it). I used it for all the lines, including panels. It’s nice to stop being critical about lines and just draw them.

I hope you dig the change and come back for the next page! Also


We creators like to know that we’re not doing this in a vacuum 🙂

Here’s the original post:

Whew. Finishing this first strip took well over a month. It shouldn’t have taken that long but I procrastinated. Putting yourself out there is kinda scary – but now it’s done & there’s no going back.

The comic itself has been floating around in my head as one of those ideas that appear one day and stubbornly refuse to leave. I don’t recall specifically when but I have to credit 3 creators for undoubtedly kicking off the idea somewhere in my subconscious:

  • Scott McCloud for Understanding Comics, who showed that explaining things can be fun & interesting
  • Marjane Satrapi for Persepolis, in whose story I recognized some of the same societal & familial situations (though without the major political and social upheavels she & her family went through)
  • Gene Yang for American Born Chinese, for taking on stereotypes, race & identity in such an engaging fashion

I wanted to note that much of my comic will deal with memories, which are fickle things. Some of my memories will be completely true and some of them will focus on that one aspect that flared and drowned everything else out. I’m curious to explore which ones stuck in my head and why. (I’m also not averse to imagining what happened ;))

I don’t have anything planned in advance – I’m just going to explore my memories and see where they lead. Or go a little Scott McCloud-y and try to explain Indian things that get lost in translation. And deep down, it may be a quest for identity too. We’ll see where it all leads.

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Arp Laszlo

Hi, I’m Arp! I make comics and write about life as an Indian-American with late-diagnosis ADHD. I’m a self-taught and self-employed creator so I write a lot about art, learning, and entrepreneurial stuff that I’ve picked up along the way.

My stories are kinda weird, because that’s just how I am. My formative influences are Indian mythology, Batman, Tintin, 70s Bollywood, Ray Harryhausen, and Monty Python. There’s no way anything normal could come out of that, right?

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